Reply To: Positive Statements
I have another question about my PS. I decided to add something that goes along with it that I had forgotten about when I first crafted it. My final version was:
“I am a Double Back Flip Manager by June 25th, 2012”
I rephrased it to say:
“I am a Double Back Flip Manager and Achiever's Club by June 25th, 2012.”
I kept getting distracted by the length (obviously Double Back Flip Manager is fake, but even the real title, combined with the addition, was too long). Should I create two different PSs? And use PP twice?
“I am a Double Back Flip Manager by June 25th, 2012” followed by
“I am Achiever's Club by June 25th, 2012.”
Just curious as to your take on it? Using PP twice with two different phrases or once with a lengthier phrase?
And you DO think the full date is essential?
Thanks for your help!